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Removed references to NeSI name#63

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This pull request updates the user guide for launching instances via the dashboard by removing the 'NeSI' prefix from the dashboard name and the sandbox environment example. Feedback was provided to correct grammatical errors and improve the readability of the network configuration note.


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If you haven't configured a network prior to the creation of a compute instance then the recommend network should be the one that has the same name as the project you are in. Example, I am in the `NeSI-SandBox-Environment` so I will pick the `NeSI-SandBox-Environment` network.
If you haven't configured a network prior to the creation of a compute instance then the recommend network should be the one that has the same name as the project you are in. Example, I am in the `SandBox-Environment` so I will pick the `SandBox-Environment` network.
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The word 'recommend' should be 'recommended' for correct grammar. Additionally, adding a comma after 'compute instance' and using 'For example' instead of 'Example' improves readability.

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If you haven't configured a network prior to the creation of a compute instance then the recommend network should be the one that has the same name as the project you are in. Example, I am in the `SandBox-Environment` so I will pick the `SandBox-Environment` network.
If you haven't configured a network prior to the creation of a compute instance, then the recommended network should be the one that has the same name as the project you are in. For example, if I am in the SandBox-Environment, I will pick the SandBox-Environment network.

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